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Figurative language is language whose meaning goes beyond the literal, the enriched significance lending the words more impact. Such language is scattered throughout this narrative and often indirectly expresses some aspect of Jerry’s inner life. One significant instance is when the rocks on the bay resemble “discolored monsters.” The rocks are also described as “fanged and angry” (Paragraph 18), personifying them again as threatening creatures. While this figurative language characterizes the rocky bay as frightening and more dangerous than the sandy beach, the idea of monsters also emphasizes Jerry’s childlike disposition and perspective, as a fear of monsters is a typical childhood trait that is much less common in adults. The language therefore dramatizes the coming-of-age journey: Though the protagonist’s inner life is vividly childlike, he nevertheless pursues independence.
When Jerry splashes around and calls to the local boys in a futile attempt to get their attention, the narration compares him to a “foolish dog.” This again shows his childishness and immaturity at the start of this journey, and it even expresses how Jerry himself feels as he is ashamed of his social clumsiness. When the narration compares Jerry’s swimming ability to that of a fish, it underscores that he is a competent swimmer even if he’s yet unable to make it through the tunnel.
Repetition draws readers’ attention to a particular element, emphasizing its importance. In this narrative, one of the most notable examples of repetition is Jerry’s chronic nosebleeds. They occur several times to illustrate the physically demanding nature of his self-imposed training. The blood represents the struggle he must endure to approach manhood. Another point of repetition is the great rock barrier that contains the tunnel. The rock is described repeatedly in the text, at turns big, sharp, overwhelming, and scary. The rocky bay is also on Jerry’s mind whenever he is not around it, further emphasizing its importance to the story. Repetition is also inherent to Jerry’s project because self-disciplined practice requires repeated effort. As Jerry visits the bay over and over, thinking about it again and again, the repetition evinces Jerry’s determination and even his obsessiveness, which inform his character arc. When this repetition stops—when he finally feels no need to return to the bay—the effect is dramatic, accentuating that Jerry is now indeed a different person than he was at the beginning of the story.
Broadly speaking, a symbol is anything that represents something beyond itself. Usually, a physical object will represent something abstract, but abstract things can also be representational. Without symbolism, this story would be a simple tale of a boy’s adventure on a beach during vacation. However, through symbolism, the story achieves more depth. Much symbolism appears even in the story’s first paragraph: That Jerry is walking with his mother symbolizes his connection with her; the fork in the path, where the path splits off toward the rocky bay, symbolizes that Jerry faces a decision of whether to mature; the rocky bay symbolizes the risks of independence, and so on. These and other symbols—such as the mother’s arm, the tunnel, and the swimming goggles—make the story more powerful. Though they complicate a text and help convey its thematic messages, symbols are often unstated and must be inferred by the reader. The most significant symbol in this text is the tunnel, which ties together various thematic elements.
The setting, while unnamed geographically, is crucial to the narrative. While the setting’s importance is primarily physical instead of geographic, social, or cultural, the fact that it is a foreign country does contribute to the protagonist’s sense of loneliness. The most important features of setting, however, are physical: the sandy beach and the rocky bay, both of which receive ample narrative description. These two contrasting environments symbolize the differences between boyhood and manhood. The sandy beach represents childhood and the safety of Jerry’s mother, while the rocky bay represents independence and the challenges of manhood. The setting also corresponds with the narrative’s mood: On the sandy beach, there is no danger, and there is the carefree, leisurely mood. On the rocky bay that is isolated from the rest of the vacationers, there is a more ominous mood. Danger lurks everywhere, and there may be no one to help Jerry should something go wrong. When Jerry’s mother forces him to go back to the sandy beach for a day, he feels out of place with how childish it seems. He knows it is not the beach for him.
By Doris Lessing