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54 pages 1 hour read

Charlie Donlea

Those Empty Eyes

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2023

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Character Analysis

Alex Armstrong (Alexandra Quinlan)

Content Warning: This section of the guide discusses murder, death by suicide, rape (including rape of minors), child pornography, alcohol use disorder, and gun violence.

The dynamic protagonist of Those Empty Eyes is Alex Armstrong, formerly Alexandra Quinlan. Her life is in many ways defined by the tragedy she endured as a child. Her family’s murders (and the ensuing “empty eyes” identity foisted upon her) force her to change her life’s trajectory: She can no longer lead a public life and thus goes into hiding, first in the Appalachians and then in London. Likewise, the tragedy shapes her motivations: Even though she goes through the motions of having the typical life of a teen, moving from high school into university, she only feigns that life in favor of investigating her family’s massacre. Alex is consumed by the quest for the truth.

One of the only ways Alex can pursue this quest without being outed as “empty eyes” is through constant reinvention. Just two years after her family’s murders, she undergoes one of these reinventions. After failing to get information from the Swiss bank, she notes, “The old version of herself may have stewed and protested at this obstacle in her path. The new Alex would simply find another way around it” (79). Alex finds strength in creating new “versions” of her identity because doing so conceals the old one, keeping Alex invisible while allowing her to assume increasingly active roles in discovering the truth of her parents’ deaths.

Some of the novel’s final revelations destabilize Alex’s perception that her reinvention has hidden her past identities. The encounter with Tracy Carr on the McCormack campus reveals that despite her many physical alterations, she’s still identifiable by her eyes. The revelation that her employer Jacqueline was her parents’ killer all along completely unravels the narrative that Alex has created of herself: She hasn’t obscured her past identities and thus gained more information about the killer while keeping the killer distant; the killer has known her all along.

At the novel’s end, Alex makes a choice about who she wants to be. She moves back to London—just as she did when she felt she couldn’t live in the US, where the public knew her only as “empty eyes”—but takes the grandfather clock from her parents’ home with her. This symbol of her past trauma speaks to how she has learned to reclaim that trauma. Alex creates a new version of herself in these final pages: She leaves behind public perceptions tied to her identity as a Quinlan but also claims the parts of her past that forged the grit, tenacity, and intelligence of her new identity.

Garrett Lancaster

Alex’s mentor, Garrett Lancaster, is by turns the novel’s hero and antihero. Like his partner Jacqueline, he was raped as a child by Jerry Lolland at Camp Montague, which deeply affected him. Until the Quinlan murders, his primary influence is an altruistic impulse toward revenge: He wants to punish men who, like Lolland, perpetrate sexual violence against minors. His plan to create a law firm that gives him the resources to pursue this goal while remaining undiscovered demonstrates his intelligence, will, and long-term planning capabilities.

Garret’s motives shift after the Quinlan murders. When Jacqueline tells him about murdering Raymond, Garrett reflects that “[t]hey had always been protectors of the innocent. Until tonight” (356). This is a turning point for Garrett; his motives shift from a desire for vengeance to guilt about Raymond and obligation toward Alex. This guilt drives his more heroic actions throughout the novel: His successful prosecution of her case, narrated from his perspective, feels victorious not only because he wins but also because he has begun the work of alleviating some of that guilt, though his progress in this is fairly ambiguous at the novel’s end. It’s unclear whether Alex has realized that Garrett, not Buck, was the “mentor” Jacqueline referenced in her final conversation with Alex. She neither confronts nor absolves Garrett; instead, he’s left with unresolved guilt.

Jacqueline Jordan

The villain of Those Empty Eyes, Jacqueline Jordan, like Garrett, is a survivor of childhood sexual abuse at Camp Montague; this experience deeply shaped her motivations, committing her to a life of trying to protect minors from sexual violence by murdering known predators. Jacqueline, like Garrett, proves herself highly intelligent and driven: She supports her work as a serial killer through careful, long-term planning and maintains a veneer of legitimacy through Lancaster & Jordan. Her path begins to diverge from Garrett’s, however, on the night of the Quinlan murders: While Garrett is horrified that their vendetta has cost the life of an innocent, Jacqueline views Raymond as “collateral damage.”

Jacqueline explicates this mindset to Alex during their final encounter in the hotel room: “My heart still aches for that child. He was in the wrong place at the wrong time. But his death was for the greater good. And your death will be the same” (324). Jacqueline’s history of abuse fundamentally altered her views on the value of life to the point that she considers all actions, no matter how morally or legally corrupt, justifiable if they support the greater cause of killing child predators. This mindset is rooted in Jacqueline’s attitude toward her past. In comparing the way adults treated her as a child to the way Alex was treated, Jacqueline complains, “I only wish I had received a fraction of that concern from those who were supposed to be watching out for me when I was being abused as a child” (324). This reveals that Jacqueline retains a resentful sense of her childhood trauma, which keeps her from understanding that she is the adult who created the predicament that led to Alex’s troubled childhood. Although Jacqueline wants to believe she’s ending cycles of trauma, she’s unable to understand her role in actively creating them.

Annette Packard

A dynamic secondary character whose presence is crucial to the resolution of Alex’s arc, Annette Packard is an FBI agent nearing retirement. Throughout her career, she has “cultivated a knack for probing into people’s personal affairs” (157). Because of this talent, she vets and investigates potential government officials. Her investigation of proposed Supreme Court justice Larry Chadwick brings her into the orbit of Alex’s work investigating Laura McAllister when their work takes both women to McCormack’s campus. Annette values consistency. She regularly swims because “It kept the weight off, and her muscles toned. It also helped keep her thoughts organized” (158). The mental and physical acuity that comes from a regimented, consistent approach to life and work is vital to Annette’s accomplishments: She perceives the danger that Alex is in when she leaves for Wytheville, and she has the strength to fight Jacqueline and buy Alex the time to save both their lives.

Annette promises to leave her line of work and join Lane Phillips’s private investigation company if she succeeds in helping Alex solve her family’s murders. Although Annette doubts she can complete this task, she surprises herself by using her wits and resources to succeed and, in doing so, commits herself to a new line of work outside the stable career she has always known. Annette moves away from reliable complacency toward a path that is unpredictable and challenging but likely more rewarding. Thus, her arc is one of disruption, though not disruption as shocking as what Alex experiences.

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