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Kate Moore

The Woman They Could Not Silence: One Woman, Her Incredible Fight for Freedom, and the Men Who Tried to Make Her Disappear

Nonfiction | Biography | Adult | Published in 2021

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Part 2, Chapters 16-21Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Part 2: “Dark Before the Dawn”

Part 2, Chapters 16-18 Summary

Without explanation, Elizabeth is suddenly transferred to Eighth Ward, McFarland’s repository for some of Jacksonville’s most violent female patients with the most severe illnesses, emotional damage, and unpredictability. Elizabeth recalled her first night in Eighth Ward, locked in a dormitory room amidst the cacophony of crying, shouting, and babbling patients, as “the blackest night of my life.” (135) Elizabeth was confused, but all she learned from attendant Minnie Tenney was that McFarland had ordered Minnie not to allow Elizabeth to leave the ward. Elizabeth immediately speculated that her written defense of her “sanity” and indictment of McFarland were behind his decision. When she awoke in the morning, she was appalled to discover that the women among her were overwhelmingly filthy, coated in dirt, grime, and, in many cases, their own waste, neglected due to overcrowding, understaffing, and often general indifference. Instead of despairing, Elizabeth accepted this change in her station as an opportunity to immerse herself in a role that would glorify God, and she immediately set to work, filling her empty chamber pot with soap and water and gently and carefully approaching her fellow patients, slowly proceeding to bathe them, brush their hair, and attempt to restore their hygiene. Moore writes, “There were no cutout dolls here, only real women: hating and loving and shouting and screaming with all the spirit they had” (123). The rumors that Elizabeth had heard about the extent of the indignity and despair being perpetuated throughout the hospital were proven true in the first few hours on the ward.

Elizabeth was stripped of all her prior privileges, including access to writing materials. Her trunk with her personal effects was confiscated and stored in the luggage room. Although Elizabeth was savagely attacked and beaten on the head by an unpredictable ward mate, her injuries severe enough that it was feared she would lose her eye, McFarland did nothing to address the matter of her safety; instead, he moved a notoriously dangerous patient to Eighth Ward from Fifth Ward, reserved for the most extremely violent criminals in the “asylum,” and insisted that she and Elizabeth sit beside each other at meals. Though she was in constant fear and felt threatened and exposed, Elizabeth made an effort to once again initiate friendships with her fellow patients, forming bonds with those who were well enough to interact and communicate and cultivating relationships with the attendants just as she had on Seventh Ward. Before being relocated to Eighth Ward, Elizabeth had developed a positive reputation for herself throughout the hospital, impressing many patients and sympathetic attendants through the copies of her initial defense of her “sanity” as news of it made the rounds of the “asylum.” Through this pre-established notion of her integrity, she would continue to make inroads throughout Jacksonville.

Part 2, Chapters 19-21 Summary

Though Eighth Ward was a nightmare for her, Elizabeth never regretted confronting McFarland with her first two pieces of writing. While his motives were punitive in an attempt to humble, intimidate, and endanger her, for he must have known what she would encounter on Eighth Ward, in his own writings, McFarland justified her transfer by claiming that her influence on the women of Seventh Ward was distressing to them and injurious to their sensibilities.

The more Elizabeth witnessed as she remained on Eighth Ward, the more compelled she became to devote herself to writing as a form of activism. Referring to McFarland, she wrote, “I must not turn back, but face this new enemy I have called into the field” (148). She started to collect discarded paper and writing implements to begin work on private journals. McFarland ignored complaints about conditions within the hospital that came from patients; he believed that any assertion that sounded like conspiracy or paranoia was evidence of illness and detachment from reality. Elizabeth realized the importance of recording everything she witnessed. McFarland mostly abstained from instructing the attendants on the wards on how to administer the use of restraints and corporal punishment. Unlike many of his contemporary superintendents, McFarland believed that restraints were an “absolute essential.” Many of the attendants were untrained, overworked, underpaid, and often with a sadistic streak; Elizabeth watched many attendants lash out in frustration and anger against the patients they treated like prisoners. While some of the most violent patients on Eighth Ward were allowed to roam freely and intimidate others, it was often the calm but minimally disobedient who were frequently placed in restraint camisoles, cuffs, mitts, wooden cribs, and screen rooms. Elizabeth protested this treatment wherever she encountered it, often locked in her recently acquired private room to prevent her interference. Despite the conditions on Eighth Ward, some kind attendants were working there, including the Tenney sisters, and slowly many staff members began to covertly help Elizabeth restore some of her privileges and cooperate with her mission to try to change the approach to patients and their treatment. She came to know Mrs. Hosmer, who ran the sewing room, and the Coes, a married couple who provided all of the food for the hospital. Knowing they could trust her because of the bold actions she had taken, they confided the injustices that they were witnessing throughout the rest of the hospital.

Part 2, Chapters 16-21 Analysis

Under McFarland’s direction, many wards at Jacksonville were structured intentionally so that women were contained categorically. Most wards were organized according to the severity of symptoms and, to a lesser extent, behaviorally and temperamentally, but women like Elizabeth were placed according to their social station. Doctors believed it would be injurious to feminine and decorous ladies to be in the company of women whose actions were counter to what was expected of women of their ilk. The rationale behind this decision was the idea that “baser,” “lower-class” women “beneath” them could be a corrupting influence and a shock to their system that could possibly interfere with their ability to recover. Victorian men and women of the middle class upheld a myth of inherent gentlemanliness and femininity in each sex, whether an individual personally adhered to or lived up to those ideals or not. The thought was that once a woman like Elizabeth was exposed to women whose life experiences were horrifying and frightening, the risk of piercing the veil existed. Elizabeth was learning things about women and the possible permutations that characterized their lives that she probably never even considered might be another person’s reality. There is nothing in her history to suggest that Elizabeth ever encountered someone with an extreme mental illness while she was in Worcester State Hospital, and her lifestyle as a middle-class minister’s wife likely did not include much exposure to the poverty, abuse, loss, and illness that would have been more common for women who found themselves on Eighth Ward in the mid-19th century. Though Moore does not speak to it directly, Elizabeth’s encounters with these women probably taught her a lot about men and what they were capable of doing to women that she may never have imagined one person would do to another. Elizabeth’s activism is ignited in Eighth Ward in a way it likely never would have been on Seventh Ward, and her immersion in this world of disadvantage and despair fueled her fire for justice.

There is vengefulness and abuse of power in McFarland’s decision in that Elizabeth is used to a certain kind of environment and a certain kind of treatment in her daily life, a kind of sheltered bell jar under which she had been kept. To relocate her among the women of Eighth Ward, McFarland would have imagined that she was not only going to be intimidated, flustered, frustrated, and frightened by the violence, cruelty, filth, and physical disgust she will experience but also that all of those factors will play a role in intimidating her into acquiescing to his expectations. He realizes that there could be this corrupting, traumatizing factor for her, and not only does he appear not to care, but he seems to delight in the possibility. By moving Elizabeth to Eighth Ward, McFarland further reveals that his goal is cowing Elizabeth into submission, another tacit recognition that she is not “insane,” just difficult and inconvenient to her husband and also to McFarland, whom she dared to expose through her writing.

Each time, however, McFarland and Theophilus conceive of some way to reduce, intimidate, correct, or humble Elizabeth into submission, she bests them with her ability to dig deep into herself and source her seemingly limitless gentility and kindness. She proves herself to be the person she professes to be, and her response reflects the theme of Tenacity, Perseverance, and Integrity as Weapons Against Injustice. She is committed to improving her surroundings, no matter where she is and what that might require of her. Recognizing that it is acceptable for her to be upset and frustrated by what is happening to her, she is also duty-bound by her faith to discover where opportunities had been presented for her to act according to God’s will. While Theophilus was willing to alter his religious beliefs on the promise of funding, not even the threat of abuse, violence, and isolation could cajole Elizabeth into compromising her idea of how she is supposed to behave as a Christian woman. Thus, she reaches out in Christian charity to her fellow inmates and attendants, and in doing so, she gains their trust. She gains a reputation as a kind person of integrity, which results in her learning the truth about McFarland and the hospital from those who work there. McFarland’s transfer aids her in her mission by opening her eyes to women who did not deserve to be confined to the “asylum” and women who were desperately ill were being treated inhumanely. Her fight, upon this revelation, becomes twofold. First, she fights for the rights of women committed to psychiatric facilities without just cause at the behest of others, believing that even the most well-meaning of family members with their loved ones’ best interests in mind may be wrong about those women, and with the knowledge that many family members had strategically orchestrated their commitment to a psychiatric facility for reasons that ranged from self-serving to nefarious. The stories of these women illuminate the theme of “Insanity” as a Prejudicial, Weaponized Label Difficult to Refute or Retract. Second, she fights for the rights of those who truly were experiencing significant mental illness. If eloquent, educated, astute women were so easily admitted to these facilities and habitually deprived of opportunities to advocate for their release, what hope did those in a deteriorated condition in desperate need of nurturing and custodial care have of advocating for fair, humane treatment? Many families simply did not have the resources to care for individuals whose illness constituted significant impairment, especially in cases in which their loved ones were violent, and Elizabeth believed that everyone was worthy and deserving of the right to be cared for in a setting that was appropriate for their needs and which would hold as chief among its objectives the maintenance of their comfort and the preservation of their dignity. In Eighth Ward, Elizabeth’s response to those around her foregrounds the thematic elements of Duty, Moral Obligation, Righteousness, and Advocacy for Others.

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