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27 pages 54 minutes read

Sandra Cisneros

Eleven

Fiction | Short Story | YA | Published in 1991

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Symbols & Motifs

The Red Sweater

The red sweater symbolizes social ostracization and poverty. From its introduction, it is presented as an undesirable object. Mrs. Price points out that it’s “been sitting in the coatroom for a month,” and every student in class denies owning it, saying, “Not mine […] Not me” (Paragraph 6). Clearly, the true owner wishes to distance themselves from the sweater. This emphasizes that it symbolizes social ostracization: It is depicted plainly as something no one wants, implying that if someone did own it, then they would by extension be unwanted too.

Rachel describes it as “an ugly sweater with red plastic buttons and a collar and sleeves all stretched out like you could use it for a jump rope” (Paragraph 7). She notes that “it’s maybe a thousand years old” and adds, “even if it belonged to me I wouldn’t say so” (Paragraph 7). The red sweater is old, used, and in poor condition, and this shabby state suggests poverty—another status for which a student might be ostracized by their peers. The fact that Mrs. Price insists it belongs to Rachel suggests she sees Rachel as someone with an impoverished background. This is why Rachel is so humiliated when she is forced to wear the sweater: She is being forced to conform Mrs. Price’s perception of her as impoverished and therefore inferior.

Rachel’s descriptions of the sweater grow more intense as she puts it on. The narration uses long, run-on sentences to showcase her desperation and anxiety; she “stands there with [her] arms apart as if the sweater hurts [her], and it does, all itchy and full of germs that aren’t even [hers]” (Paragraph 18). She also notes that it “smells like cottage cheese” (Paragraph 18), a vivid sense description that emphasizes her horror. The moment is so distressing because when Rachel puts the sweater on, she becomes associated with its undesirable status, and she is desperate to avoid the consequences of this social stigma: judgment and ostracization from her peers.

Birthday Cake and Singing

Rachel repeatedly thinks about her birthday celebration at home, which will be marked by a special cake baked by her mother and everyone singing the birthday song. Both the cake and the song, two happy and joyful images, represent Rachel’s family and how she leans on the thought of them for comfort. The first time Rachel mentions song and cake, she does so to reassure herself, and they serve as something to look forward to. In this early part of the text, family is something Rachel can still depend on, as she successfully maintains her composure despite the red sweater being thrust upon her. Rachel next thinks of song and cake after she is forced to wear the sweater. As she dons this symbol of poverty, which invites the judgment of her peers, Rachel’s hope is crushed. She no longer feels connected to or excited by thoughts of her birthday, pointing out that “it’s too late” (Paragraph 21). Her feelings about her birthday parallel how she feels about her family, and her journey from excitement to dejection showcases her development throughout the story.

The Runaway Balloon

The runaway balloon appears at the very end of the story, in the last paragraph. At this point in the text, Mrs. Price has totally oppressed Rachel’s personal desires and autonomy. Rather than finding joy and solace in thoughts of her impending birthday celebration with her family, Rachel now wishes that the day was “far away already, far away like a runaway balloon, like a tiny dot in the sky, so tiny-tiny you have to close your eyes to see it” (Paragraph 22). The runaway balloon replaces Rachel’s earlier daydreams of song, family, cake, and candles. Rather than grounding herself in reality and looking forward to the party, Rachel now daydreams in the abstract and wishes it away. Her identification with the vanishing balloon illustrates her wish to rise above her current circumstances, to escape this mortifying day, and her desire to shrink into nothingness, to avoid further judgment and isolation.

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