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48 pages 1 hour read

Peter Swanson

Eight Perfect Murders

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2020

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Character Analysis

Malcolm Kershaw

Content Warning: This section contains references to sexual assault, addiction, and death by suicide, in addition to descriptions of murders.

Malcolm Kershaw is the unreliable narrator of Eight Perfect Murders. He claims the novel is his memoir, and he writes in the first person (using the pronouns I/me). Other characters perceive him as attractive and his hair is “prematurely white” (48). Malcolm is also called Mal: “my name, shortened, is Mal—French, of course, for bad” (66). His primary identity is based on his profession: “I was a bookseller [...] what I loved most of all was to read—that was my true calling” (12). He identifies with his labor at the bookstore and his consumption of books. A large portion of the novel is Malcolm retelling the plots of novels and reacting to them. His identity is formed around lists of books, such as his “Eight Perfect Murders” blog post. He also reads poetry, but “no longer [has] the stomach for contemporary mystery novels” (2). This is ironic since he co-owns and runs a mystery bookstore, Old Devils, in Boston.

Malcolm mentions that he is a widower early in the novel, but doesn’t admit to killing his wife, Claire, until the end of the novel. He also mentions his recurring nightmares early in the novel. Eventually, Malcolm confesses that he is “grieving for someone [he’s] murdered” (256). His motive for killing Claire is her infidelity and drug use. There are various inconsistencies in Malcolm’s story. For instance, he claims that he was “not a jealous husband” (74) and waited “like the wife of a sea captain” (75) for Claire when she cheated on him. In the second section of the novel, Malcolm admits that he arranged the murder of her drug dealer, Eric. However, he omits the fact that his rage at her actions caused him to run her off the road until the end.

He created an online identity with an alias to pull off this murder swap based on Strangers on a Train. Malcolm says, “Finding a way to kill [Eric] got me through the worst of my grief” (256). To find the person he swapped murders with, Malcolm creates a second alias for the same website, Duckburg. At the end of the novel, he admits that he might also have used the alias Doctor Sheppard and commented on his own blog. These clues and his unreliability can be read to invalidate his claim that he is not Marty Kingship. Marty, Malcolm claims, is his friend. However, Malcolm also notes that he had “never been good at making friends” (114) and “the more I learn about them, the harder they are to see and hear in any meaningful way” (115). Malcolm and Marty are doppelgangers, or doubles. They have similar names with the same “initials [...] astute readers out there will be convinced that there is no Marty Kingship, there is only Malcolm Kershaw” (263). Despite these clues, the real identity of Marty Kingship is never revealed.

Marty Kingship

Marty Kingship is, according to Malcolm, “a former police officer [...] who was now working part-time as a security consultant for one of the big downtown hotels” (113) in Boston. Marty has “a broken, loveless marriage” (242). Marty reads five books per week and is “always looking for book recommendations” (169-70).

Before learning his identity, Malcolm refers to Marty as his “shadow” (109). He only knows that his shadow killed Eric in exchange for him killing a man named Norman. They swapped murders on a dark website called Duckburg. Gwen, an FBI agent, calls Marty “Charlie” before she knows his identity. This name can be connected to the series of murders based on the A.B.C. Murders, where the people with the same initials are killed. Marty wanted to kill a woman named Robin who wrote a book that inspired his wife’s infidelity and covered it up by killing multiple people with bird names. A famous jazz musician Charlie Parker is referred to as the Bird. Like Malcolm, Marty is unreliable. He claims that he doesn’t “know what the fuck a blog even is” (168) while committing murders based on the “Eight Perfect Murders” blog post. His identity as the killer is revealed in the final section of the novel.

FBI Agents: Mulvey, Perez, and Berry

The inciting incident of the novel is FBI Special Agent Gwen Mulvey questioning Malcolm about his Old Devils blog post “Eight Perfect Murders.” She is very pale, Malcolm notices. He realizes “it wasn’t just her skin that was pale. It was all of her” (4). Malcolm also describes her as looking like “An English professor maybe” (30). Gwen admits that she is the only one “convinced of the connection” (21) between the murders on Mal’s list. Gwen brings Malcolm along in her investigation of Elaine’s murder. Shortly after they search Elaine’s house, Gwen is suspended by the FBI.

After her suspension, Gwen contacts Malcolm in secret. She eventually admits that she is the daughter of Steven Clifton, but changed her last name to her mother’s birth name. Steven was the middle school teacher who molested Claire. Gwen found Malcolm, and eventually his blog, after Steven was killed on his bike. Malcolm eventually admits that he killed Steven, and Claire thinks this is an act of justice because Steven told her that he abused children.

When Gwen is officially off the case, two agents, Agent Berry (he/him pronouns) and Agent Perez (she/her pronouns), question Malcolm. They also ask for information about his alibis during the murders, not trusting Gwen’s investigation after it was revealed that her father was a conflict of interest in the case. Perez interacts with Malcolm more than Berry. She “couldn’t have been much older than thirty, with short black hair and a round face” (157). Unlike Gwen, these agents are static characters who do not hear Malcolm’s confession.

Old Devils Employees: Emily, Brandon, and Nero

Two people work for Malcolm in the bookstore. He describes Emily Barsamian as “extremely bookish” (30) and possibly a “secret writer” (49). She wears skirts with t-shirts that feature images such as the cover of We Have Always Lived in the Castle” (55). She shares more with the other employees at the store than she does with Malcolm. He views her as a “suddenly silent teenager” (116). Eventually, Malcolm learns that Emily is dating Jane Prendergast, a mystery novelist who has events in the store.

In contrast to Emily, Brandon Weeks is Malcolm’s “gregarious employee” (49). He is the source of “nonstop chatter” (61), while Emily is more reserved. Malcolm thinks Brendon will leave the bookstore when he completes his business degree, but is unsure about Emily working there in the long-term. Brandon and Emily share a love for books and the bookstore cat, Nero.

Malcolm rescued Nero after killing Norman. Nero was Norman’s cat and Malcolm took him when he left Norman’s house. Shortly thereafter, Nero became “the store cat” (2) and his “entire universe is two book-lined rooms and a series of strangers, a few of whom feed him” (25). Nero seems content there. Malcolm notes that Nero “loves his life in the bookstore” (181).

Brian and Tess Murray

Brian Murray is the co-owner of Old Devils and a mystery author. He is 60, but looks older, and “writes the Ellis Fitzgerald series” (50). This series inspired Gwen to go into law enforcement. However, Brian is “an alcoholic, a functioning one, but barely. He writes his yearly book in about two months and takes the rest of the year off to drink” (131). Brian lives in Boston, while his wife, Tess Murray mostly lives in Florida and owns a jewelry store there. She used to be a publicist and is much younger than Brian.

Brian is somewhat of a static character. He is known for telling the “exact same stories” (131), or being a “habitual storyteller” (57). After he breaks his arm, Tess comes to stay with him. They are revealed to have a somewhat open marriage and Tess is interested in sleeping with Malcolm after checking in with Brian about it. Malcolm mistakes her desire for sex as a murderous desire, but she is consistently flirtatious with him.

Murder Victims: Claire, Steven, Nicholas, and Elaine

Malcolm eventually confesses to killing his wife, Claire, and the man who abused her as a child, Steven Clifton. Before Malcolm’s confession, his descriptions of his dead wife point to his grief over her loss. He remembers how she “read with a pen in her hand” (40), would heavily annotate all her books, and met Malcolm at the bookstore. Claire “loved the feeling of getting a tattoo but could never pick any image that she’d want on her body forever. So she just got lines, one at a time” (71). Malcolm also recalls how Claire made films. Her death is initially described as a car accident: “sliding off an overpass on Route 2 while inebriated” (58). However, it was Malcolm who caused the accident. Claire “avoided collisions [...] I knew if I pulled into her lane, she’d swerve to avoid me” (256), Malcolm admits at the end of the novel.

Malcolm also confesses that he killed Steven Clifton, the science teacher who molested Claire in middle school, at the end of the novel. Gwen eventually confesses that Steven, sometimes called Steve, was her father. She believes that killing him was a just act because Steve confessed to her about molesting Claire and other girls.

Over the course of the novel, Marty kills two people: Elaine Johnson and Nicholas Pruitt. The latter is “bookish” (165) and teaches English courses at a local university, as well as directs productions of Shakespeare’s plays there. However, Nicholas (who is also called Nick) is “no saint” (167). He has had multiple restraining orders taken out by his ex-girlfriends against him. Malcolm sees Nicholas’s body after Marty murders Nicholas by forcing him to drink alcohol laced with drugs.

While Malcolm does not see Elaine’s corpse, he sees her house. There, Marty set up a shelf with all the books from the “Eight Perfect Murders” blog post and scared Elaine to death by jumping out at her in a clown mask. He knew about her existing heart condition from talking to her after author readings at Old Devils. Gwen questions Malcolm about Elaine and, initially, Malcolm doesn’t tell Gwen that Elaine is a regular at the bookstore. After Gwen calls him out on this, Malcolm reveals that Elaine was not well liked because she made bigoted comments and was generally argumentative.

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